The Broken Hearted

I await you
in this cold lonely place
I dream of you
as icy nights grow late
I love you
if only it were true
I long for you
as from afar I watch you

My pain grows bright
red like a wound
I hate these long nights
my heart shrouded in doom

I will come
I won't stay away
Please don't say no
Let my sweet words sway

I want you
as I sicken and die
I still dream of you
as inside I endlessly cry
but my eyes won't show
as you walk away
the horror I feel
as I now fade away

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

You brought out a lot of energy with this one. Sad yet very powerful.

[Black Cat Fever]

Thanks very much.

[maria ( rose)]

your very welcome!

[Susie Q]

This is an awesome poem that describes something we may all experience at one time or other in our lifetime. Very powerful.

[Black Cat Fever]

Thank you, much appreciated!

[Sami Khalil]

"I dream of you
as icy nights grow late
I love you
if only it were true
I long for you
as from afar I watch you

My pain grows bright
red like a wound"

Painful and sad. You bring power to those emotions to give it max impact...Splendid

[Black Cat Fever]

Thank you, my friend!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[Coyote Song]

I can feel the pain in your words. A broken heart is truly tragic and hard to recover from. It feels like we've died when trapped in that situation/condition. Impressive poem!

[Black Cat Fever]

Thank you very much.

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. Hard to accept love that can't be. The heart and mind tried to hold on. I like the thoughts leading to the logical ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Black Cat Fever]

Thank you very much.

[Tina Kline]

A very powerful write and tragic in its emotions.
That's one of the worse pains and hurts to have to suffer,
a broken heart. You did a fantastic job on this.

[Black Cat Fever]

Thank you!