Golden Sands Mystery

Running across the golden sands

ebony, sleek, glistening in the sun

overhead black birds can't understand

that the day will never be done

eyes that glitter like twin emerald jewels

the heat radiating from what I can be

behind me I leave no clues

Up ahead of me is eternity

the golden sands ripple and shift

the hot sun burns on and on

a wind arrives coiling and lifts

in the distance I hear the sun's song

the shifting heat golden sands never end

I never grow wearing of my unrelenting race

I am ebony, sleek and this contest I will win

I'll keep on turning until I leave no trace

Reviews

[Calamityofgin]

the shifting heat golden sands never end
I never grow wearing of my unrelenting race
I am ebony, sleek and this contest I will win
I'll keep on turning until I leave no trace."

Darlin..this is quite mesmerizing in phrase and lay..a gorgeous piece. Very sensual and fantastic..

Love and wishes of evanescent winds.
Calamity of jen

[Black Cat Fever]

Thanks a lot.

[Sean M. Addams]

very beautifully done the words become a canvas and the pen becomes the paint brush.. nice job ..

[Miss Owl]

Enjoyable story in your poem. It is full of mystery and enchantment. A sleek large cat.

[Star Wolf]

This is different. I really like it. Some sort of wild sleek feline racing across desert golden sands. Beautiful and breathtaking.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Enchanting and alluring. A strange creature as slick and silky as the sames, changing, shifting, emrign as the sand moves push bout by hot desert winds.A very creative and unique poem.

[Coyote Song]

A strange and exotic tale. There surely is a mystery with these golden sands. I think the mystery is a black panther running and turning as she goes along. Fantastic poem/story here.

[Tina Kline]

Very different, full of magic and enchantment. A mystery poem of transformation. Very well written, love the visuals and imagery in this piece.