consumed

consumed

A Poem by Nick

What have you done?
a dark black shadowy cloud of pain as thought darken.
once we experienced heaven,
innocent and childlike,
but your desire shrank.
a horrific fever of darkened-
emotions follow death,follow pain,
love burnt to ashes. 
in a burst of hatred,
i condemn you.

© 2013 Nick


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Divorce and it ended? Nothing is forever and those words are truly conveyed here. I speak what I interpret and I can only speak of your format and that you did a great job of penning your words. I am not your normal reviewer. You could have made this longer but then again, a poet should never answer the question of the subject of the poem. So you did well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very good NIck...Just remember on working on Grammar and punctuation.
Also remember what i said last night. Capitalize...~love sis

Posted 11 Years Ago



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