consumed

What have you done?

a dark black shadowy cloud of pain as thought darken.

once we experienced heaven,

innocent and childlike,

but your desire shrank.

a horrific fever of darkened-

emotions follow death,follow pain,

love burnt to ashes. 

in a burst of hatred,

i condemn you.

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

Divorce and it ended? Nothing is forever and those words are truly conveyed here. I speak what I interpret and I can only speak of your format and that you did a great job of penning your words. I am not your normal reviewer. You could have made this longer but then again, a poet should never answer the question of the subject of the poem. So you did well.

[Angelove]

This is very good NIck...Just remember on working on Grammar and punctuation.
Also remember what i said last night. Capitalize...~love sis