Hurt

how I am feeling since I just got broken up with

   I thought you loved me but I should know

   just for you it was all a show. I hate this

   time in my life for right now I just want

to die. You played me well and I knew it,

   for no one likes me and I hate it. You did

stuff with me to make me feel special

but now that I know it, it hurts deep

    inside. You've done this more than

once but I thought that I could trust

you, I thought I loved you. Where

has all the time gone now, for I am

lost and confused. My heart is

beating slower and slower ,because it

feels like you just ripped it into a million

pieces. How could you do that to me again

When I gave you a second chance? Don't

ever ask for me again because you have caused

me all this pain. I hope you know what karma is

because I know that it's coming your way.

Author's Note

sorry if its not the best I am kind of not focused and I'm crying

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"lost and confused. My heart is

beating slower and slower ,because it

feels like you just ripped it into a million

pieces."

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)..........................

[ciara anders]

Thank you very much for sharing your opinion :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[stars are far]

I know how did you write this, i can relate to is 100%..
and hey you still young dont cry over him , someone better will be waiting for you in the future.. and when you move on and dont cry anymore you will find that he wasnt perfect and the one who really loves you will never make you sad.

well writen ..

[ciara anders]

Thank you very much :)