WITHOUT CAUTION

Without Caution!

I walk down the stairs
Aware of what awaits me
She comes over a great deal
But no one dares open the door
For we know
What the consequences will be

I open the door without caution
I'm tired of the lies
And ignorances My Family must keep
I pull open the door and sa I do
She says " It's about time"

We sit on the couch, she looks at me
I turn my head away
I feel her dark eyes
They stare at me, to my very soul
Then , to her book

She begins to write
That I am uncooperative
I don't care!

She speaks to me, but I only hear
A few words, but I only hear
How "it's amazing, you are never home"
When she comes over
I tell her to get out

I don't want to talk to her
She gets up and walks out the front Door
Just as she came
I run to my room and cry
I begin my homework

I can't do it
I leave the house
I don't know where I am
I'm lost, it's dark outside now
I feel down and hope I
Don't make it through the night
I don't know what happened after that
I never woke up! 

Author's Note

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK IAM INTERRESTED TO HEAR ANYTHING

Reviews

[bard]

I actually re-wrote it so that it was in Blank Verse Form. Apart from a few changes, it could be quite good.....not to say that it isn't already. It just needs a Little polishing!
The more that you write from the heart, the easier it will flow.
If you like, I will send it to you and remove the copy that I have written down, so that you can see how it could look!.......bard

[thecoolone52]

ohhh at first i thought it was a therapist or something in the room.... but then maybe it was your mother or somtehing and she killed you on your way out.... Or something killed you when you were running or whatever...... i mean you leave alot to the reader kind of like a cliff hanger in a way.... it was a decent write i enjoyed it