it's a lie that i fear

 

I’ll always be beside you

In whatever you go through

Our love will last

Forget the past

I’ll give my hope to you

And long for the day you do to

 

Say you’ll be there

Say that you care

I need to know

As you never let your feelings show

 

Is it me that you need?

Is it me that you long for?

Is it me that makes your heart sore?

 

Just tell me the truth

Even if it’s not the words I want to hear

It’s a lie that I fear

Reviews

[A]

I really liked this! This is not terrible! I could actually see this being a song. That's what I got from reading your first stanza and the rest went together perfectly. Personally, I think this piece is great and full of emotions. Keep writing! :) Great piece!

[Camille Corbett]

Terrible. Why would you ever want to post this is public!? Awkward