No Home In The Ending

There is no taboo, just come with it

pull a Sabu and take it to extreme limits

body black and blue, but the red flows within us

i trap and stack too, the dead wrote beginnings 

that i abide to, the guide for winning

my pen rewrote the book, nod your head to my mixings

ill ride and die, cant lie about these vibes that im sending 

ending the, in home, going no, there's Big, go to fixing

rethink that s**t, hang it high, let it dry, till i decide its still pending

Frankensteins  ill scientist, old stitching im re-hemming  

 

Author's Note

"ending the, in home, going no, there's big, go to fixing"
<<=========>>
"fixing to go big there's no going home in the ending"

Reviews

[silent poet]

I read and re-read this about 6times. I try to perceive it the way you want me too, or the way you want your readers too. I am torn between my perception and yours. is that weird? maybe I'm in too deep. So I take a step back and read as if I've never spoken with you, as If this is my first time reading anything from you. My perception remains the same., you are a remarkable person and the more you allow me to get deeper inside your mind, heart and soul. The more my fogs clear..


what exactly did this part mean? (going no, there's big)

and these words, I feel the most, but feel to it's entirety all you've wrote..
go to fixing
rethink that s**t, hang it high, let it dry, till i decide its still pending
Frankensteins ill scientist, old stitching im re-hemming

[BLitZeD]

Double meaning

"going no, theres big"
in a chopped up way as you asked, the confusion of dying and a reference of seeing biggie spelled big so it made sense still when you flipped the un-chopped version

"ending the, in home, going no, there's big, go to fixing"
"fixing to go big there's no going home in the ending"

[silent poet]

that is so dope! Even as many times as I've read it? I couldn't see that. But now reading back after the fact you've clarified ,.... that was cool how you crept that.. the ending still my favorite lines. when you write sometimes you're in a whole other place that sometimes doesn't portray a picture clearly but always a complicated one. may be clear to you but words take different turns to everyone. therefore painting a whole other scene. they say take words as they are and see them how you feel fit but to me if it's anothers' words? then I want to see the picture you see.. thank you for explaining.. nice job

[Michael Wright]

Good read overall
Try and punch up your vocabulary

[dan]

You're on a small stage in a coffee house, all amped up on 5-Hour Energy shots, rat-a-tat-tatting your delivery of this piece....do you hear that crowd? Yeah, I can't either. But only because I've never tried it. With this type of writing it could work very well. take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

lol thank you,

[costa siwale]

good lyrics, good words, great poem there

[BLitZeD]

thank u sir

[Brinleigh Bailey]

I really like your style of writing. After reading through many of your poems, there is always that similar tone. An unexpected rhyme, a nice flow, but also a story is told. I really like that. Very well done.

[BLitZeD]

thank you very much my lady

[S. Renee Musarra]

I love the ending of your poem.

[BLitZeD]

thanks alot