54in8

54 i 8 days, i been banking on this site

people f*****g love me, just threw how i write

maybe help them threw rough times, point them to the light 

stories of emotions, with progression they just might

come back to haunt me, aggression in one life

is all i need, the dissections mandatory, but really? Jesus Christ

when is the dying ending, no will is left to fight

up until my final day, gate keeper of the night

Reviews

[silent poet]

wow, there goes that modesty again.. nice flow