Dr.3a.m. Walker

Im lucid in these dreams

my words are fluent, like fluid down stream 

a poet who knew it, spoke the truest for others to review it on screen

even tho this pen levitated to his hand, with the paper on his team

his ambitions revoked, so smoke raised from the bowl of his green

he lay dormant and sleep, until provoked, the most hateful of mean

no one here to save you, not even an angel. 

lean where u want, you'll find no shoulder in God nor Gabriel

so second thoughts leave a menorah an dreidel still 

id rather flip a coin to some w***e or a maids aurora, 

board on restored Alice, bill me a floor up, in the florescent room,

 door to the palace, neon down the corridor,

 incandescent beams shoot forth when i roar, but inconsistent due

unsteady balance whispers, there second guessing you

lay on the floor, his bible, the scriptures he tore, 

pictures drip to the store, floor of the lie, unplug the cord, 

the matrix was just testing you 

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

truly a lucid dream having variety of words in description

[Emily]

To be completely honest, it was very confusing. Much like an actual dream!

[BLitZeD]

lol, well I'm sorry about that. its not about a regular dream if that helps. its about a lucid dream "conscience dreaming"

[Emily]

I love the wording and the meaning!
Well done!!

[silent poet]

very nice ( like fluid down stream
a poet who knew it, spoke the truest for others to review it on screen) ur way with how you paste thoughts together is always intriguing .. good write

[BLitZeD]

lol, this 1s a tru story that never happened

[silent poet]

Nice.........

[wordman]

beautiful metaphors ,loved the ending

[B]

Very creative and so different
I feel such an edge in your wording

Really cool

[A writer]

Umm...sorry...but...what?! ?

[BLitZeD]

a representation of lucid dreaming

[A writer]

Lol. I have no idea what that is. Lol.

[BLitZeD]

being fully awake and aware during a dream