Tonight I will be interviewing an artist that's nowhere close to being new.
With talent that alludes most of us, Her skills protrude,
weathered yet still shines, tested, tried and proved to be true.
So it is my pleasure to introduce a personal friend of mine,
A female who, claims a Sharp tongue, a lyricist from York of New.
Why don't you tell us a little bit about yourself before the rest we get into.
A pleasure to be here before we continue I'd like to say thank you for this interview,
my tongue yes is sharp I like to cut into anything the chef desires or what's on the menu/
the venue is beautiful I feel right at home it's pitiful I kind of wish that I wasn't here alone,
my fans I thank but at times get's lonely but back to myself appreciate the kindness you've shown me/
brooklyn that's where I'm from where the skies try to own me, so i write all through my days pour my heart
in many ways and hope one day the world can feel me then I know I've done my job at stake,
Well hey, that's great. I've read many of your writings here and I must say, on paper you rape. The ink like your heart, both on your sleeve,
A few we wrote together. After the first I did believed, we didn't meet by mistake. Like for f***s sake, the flow just goes and next thing I know theirs a bunch of words I'm reading for the first time, like I've never wrote. Well BabiiGirl that's fate. You as a person have encouraged, corrected, challenged and pushed me beyond my limits, helping me to grow. So to all who witness this show.
let them know who their feeling.
**whispers** pppssstt.. thats a set up for Chameleon lol**
With massive appeal, the mass can feel my rapture I change and kill, arrange and feel my words are dark poetry I strain to deal,
was a honor to work with you days of chills, now my honors they lurking through stages filled,
they could never pay me enough my wages real,
many faces beneath the skin it's a outrage to FEEL, but I admire your strengths you got crazy skills,
thank you for the compliments the way they made me feel, that its truly more than music I crave and steal,
my brain is filled with venom I stay in fields,
in major ways my intents to shield my danger wields, I play in storms with monsters so I'm trained in steel,
Glad I'm not Spider-Man because I'm not sure I could shield the mayhem you spill.
Your like a Spielberg movie, I feel like its raining pills.
Hail the size of golf balls, Deranged she kills.
If I'm the King your the Queen, Marriage arranged but still, we reside with the eyes of the hills.
One of a kind, ride or die. I often wonder how the f**k are you that fly and able to wreck the mike in heels. Acidic, it's sick s**t how the skin slips with no grip. Love the way you make me feel. I'm f*****g addicted, like a crazed fan, please have my kids miss? But all jokes aside, You are a star in the sky so high it's hard to see you with the naked eye. If only you where in the clouds with your sound but lets not beat around the bush. Your Sound Cloud is space bound. Would you care to elaborate on that in the next round?
I'm flattered but that's really not what matters. I may be a lil out there but I'm more or less dramatic,
kids you can have it. my life you got apart of but this not the place to hash it, naked eye bandit I saw you as fan kid,
but ever since I saw you write my plans got stranded, turned into a fan myself then it became a habit,
my rings were talking too to them jealous side rabbits,peeling out the average dealers taking out the savage,
rhymes flowing every where my fan had to have it, cutting through the barriers seeing strange talking parrots,
mind just ridiculous and heart filled with lavish, my skill unpredictable with thrills that a famish,
I was born before my time so i gotta build a canon to take out everything faster than it panned in,
Panoramic rampage, Chameleon magik. She's GMO's to your organics. Automatic to your semi, like a f*****g magnet. Break a n***a like hes made of ceramic and hash tag him. #fuckingstatic. Miss Fantastic, an a*s that's pornographic. Is she savage? Born before her time, shes f*****g Jurassic. I'm gana end this with a classic. So to the left I pass it. Always and forever give um Hell Boo, show them what a psychopath is.
:ERROR 420: SIGNAL LOST: ATTEMPTING TO REESTABLISH CONNECTION: PLEASE STANDBY:
To my surprise you guys didnt like this one too much. you win some you loose some. yes it was set up to be an interview, just figured it would be a unique format for a write, change of pace if you will. maybe it wasnt exactly a formal interview, but when me and silent poet write together the goal is always to write a dope ass piece, with ridiculous rhymes and fire word play, so if this interviews legitimacy was compromised by me not toning it down or the meanings getting lost in the word play, then so be it. Its not your average interview because nothing we do together is average. Its best to be different lol. so my apologies to those who didnt like it, i guess i would encourage you to go read some of the other pieces we wrote together. im sure you will find something you like.
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This sounds to me like a good bye between the two of you. You say she has a sharp tongue, mmm, think the red writer does, which I think is you. It seems like a competition between the two of you, or a farewell and not a whole lot being said. Maybe its an argument between the two of you brought to verse. It just isn't offering much, and not much point to it.
BLitZeD, This 'interview' formatting idea was very unique and original. But when reading it the piece doesn't really come off as an interview. It's presented as the two of you just trading verses in which to freestyle. There doesn't seem to be continuity between your two voices.
Man you know how big a fan or yours I am; this just doesn't really measure up to your usual standards. You and SiL3nt Po3t are both very talented in you own element; it just didn't really gel in this collab. Sorry to say that. Maybe if you just took turns riffing on a main theme it would have been brilliant. I just don't know. A nice effort though. take care...dan
Blitz....i am a fan sometimes...but this just didnt go anywhere for me...sorry.
There are grammar errors i overlook for style...but in this interview setting....where both of you are making them...it just makes me want to strangle you both...
was a honor to work with you days of chills, now my honors they lurking through stages filled,
they could never pay me enough my wages real,
A few we wrote together. After the first I did believed
I am sorry...but i think the both of you need to brush up for this kind of poetry. It went no where.
This does not make me want to see more if im new to you...and i know you can do amazing things blitz....but you need to learn the fundementals of your craft.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
what matters. I may be a lil out there but I'm more or less dramatic,
kids you can have it. <.. read morewhat matters. I may be a lil out there but I'm more or less dramatic,
kids you can have it.
?????? Kids you can have it. That is just nonsensical
There are stylistic choices of voice...and then there is...kids you can have it.
9 Years Ago
shes replying to my reference to kids / Spielberg comment in the previous verse...im sorry you didnt.. read moreshes replying to my reference to kids / Spielberg comment in the previous verse...im sorry you didnt like it, the punctuation's in this are more or less indicators of beginning/end of a bar. we put it together over facebook so a ".,or/" are all the same as skipping down a line for the next bar. in mine , is pause . is end of the bar. but either way , you win some you lose some i guess lol thanks for your review
9 Years Ago
Hey...i love a lot of what you do...this just didnt flip my switch...but there are plenty of times i.. read moreHey...i love a lot of what you do...this just didnt flip my switch...but there are plenty of times i dont. ..maybe it just wasnt my space
I have mad respect for you....i dont think this showed your plenty talent.
And....the strange mix of colors threw me. It was offen s ive to the eyes....two fonts...mmm...bette.. read moreAnd....the strange mix of colors threw me. It was offen s ive to the eyes....two fonts...mmm...better...just names up top like a play script.
9 Years Ago
Are you black? I just grew up with a liberal environment where....mmm...you just dont say n***a. ..t.. read moreAre you black? I just grew up with a liberal environment where....mmm...you just dont say n***a. ..that might have been what made me most uncomfortable.....idk...sorry doll...i am still a fan .
9 Years Ago
na, im not black. but am more then comfortable with saying n***a. I dont feel like ive ever used it .. read morena, im not black. but am more then comfortable with saying n***a. I dont feel like ive ever used it out of line. but na, no need to say sorry, i applaud you for leaving a comment on something you didnt like , most people dont do that. thanks for your insight.
i give them the plans i drew up
with thoughts methodically calculated
and so intricately placed ,
every outcome was accounted for
and algebraically related.
f*****g statistically graced,
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