Mirror rorriM

Mirror rorriM

A Poem by BLitZeD

I sit and wait on this date feeling emotions I hate.
Emotions of hate , so I back track and track back to the oceans I've made.
Relieved the motions of fate, notions of safe, so I throw back this potion of sage. 
Self destruction coaxing with age. A little red button toting my name.
Poking my brain, can't think straight, believe I can't to this it came.
I sneeze and visualize my carpet with a blood stain.
Theirs no b***h in my eyes, I seize varmints but don't have Thud's aim.
I'm not playing a thugs game, but I see carnage, I'm not saying I claim sane
But I've slain Satan so many times I claim Saint. That red, I claim paint, That shame I frame fate.
I just want to go back to to where I came from in the first place, 
But that gate is not in the same state.
The hand I have now is different, I don't got that same ace. 
Its just not the same case,  From the back of my hand to outer space. 
Its like, If you look into a mirror, Do you see your own face? 
 

© 2016 BLitZeD


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best thing i've read all day!!!!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ahhh my talented buddy.I've been gone awhile but ur talent has grown old man,i really loved the rawness of this piece

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

same s**t dif day, u still in the cape? lol
micky

3 Years Ago

Yes with all the lions;P
BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

eryone loves lions
wow,amazing.i can understand every word and get a good image of what your saying.i like to picture images of poems i my head.it's my way of trying to understand the poet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Love this. Love the sharp clear writing. Love the paranormal/karmic references. Favorite line of all time. Maybe forever, lol. "But I've slain Satan so many times I claim Saint. That red, I claim paint, That shame I frame fate." Perfect!

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thank you very much
I've been reading through some of your poems and I think this one is my favorite. It's short and simple but very well worded and interesting. I think poetry is one of the best ways to express ones thoughts/feelings and you did amazing. Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

you on now?
slightly terrified

2 Years Ago

I haven't been on this site for a long time but i got the email that you commented! I am on now. Hah.. read more
BLitZeD

2 Years Ago

thats f*****g awsome, lol im flattered with the special email notification u got, ya site kind of de.. read more
Honestly, I kind of relate to this poem. It talks about the disassociation of oneself, and that is what I am currently experiencing. Sometimes, I don't even know who I am. The last line here really exemplified the point. And sometimes I wish I can go back to being who I was a couple years ago. But I can't, so. Anyway, very relateable poem. Thanks for writing it~

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

glad you could relate, i often feel ways that music or in this case poety does not seem to touch upo.. read more
Nice format, gives it a frenetic feel. The question, when we don't feel ourselves, who is that person anyway?

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

thanks, and once i figure out who that person is ill let you know
Was that rap or poem? ;) severely psychocool! xD :D gr8 one bro :D :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

I see no difference in the two . thanks man
Wow. seriously, just wow. Whenever I read these lines, I feel like Eminem doing a rap in "Love the way you lie"

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

lol thanks bro. glad you liked it
amazing! truly loved it! the end is so nice! keep writing @BLitZeD !

Posted 3 Years Ago


BLitZeD

3 Years Ago

:) highly appreciated

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