Tick Tock.

If you have two choices in life, and only two choices in life what would you choose? To fly or to lie down?

Drip tap

Drip Tap

Blood flowing free of the vein

Looking over the edge

Drip tap drip tap

My sight fading rapidly

Drip tap, drip tap

My sight fades into the depth of the edge

Drip tap drip tap           

Flying freely through the air

Drip

Fading

Drip

Flying freely through the air, I close my eyes with my one last goodbye

Drip

I say goodbye to the sky

Drip

Tap.

Reviews

[deeps]

I agree this reminds me a little of an IV.
I enjoyed this well written write.

[Megan]

For some reason the drip tap reminds me of an IV in a hospital. It's like you're just laying there listening to the IV, straining to stay awake but no matter what you do your eyes just want to close. It's beautiful, the rhythm is so catching and I love how you focus on just one sound. It's so intimate and it's really easy to get caught up in this character and feel what they feel. You saying you're a horrible poet is a bunch of hoo-haa!