Eternal Snow

YAY A SONG.

oh who knew you would be the one / to break the silence / wipe the tear stains / and in my own reality / i wished for eternal light... / but with you around / do you know how hard it is? / to be happy...? / [if you had one wish / could wish for one thing / what would you choose, dear? / of course, not me / if you had one wish / could wish for one thing / i know what you'd want / you wouldn't want me...] / oh who knew you would be the one / to break the silence / and in my own reality / i could have one thing... / happiness / but with you around / do you know how hard it is / to be happy? / [if you had one wish / could wish for one thing / what would you choose, dear? / of course, not me / if you had one wish / could wish for one thing / i know what you'd want / you wouldn't want me...] / you wouldn't want me... / [if you had one wish / could wish for one thing / what would you choose, dear? / of course, not me / if you had one wish / could wish for one thing / i know what you'd want / you wouldn't want me...] / and in my own reality / i wished for all the bad things to go / but they never did leave me / so i wished for eternal snow...

© 2011 master squiggles

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Sarah

so nice. love, saddness and loss all put into a poem

Posted 12 Years Ago

Luke Ritta

Great work....great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

~goh~

So prettyful :3
You know what else are?
Certain stone statues...until you turn your back...MWAHAHAH *shot*

Posted 12 Years Ago

halflives

OMIGAWD. THAT WAS... amazing. I am in faeking AWE right now, d****t. AWE.

AWE, D****T.

Posted 12 Years Ago

~dr.nugget~

so pretty...

Posted 12 Years Ago

compositionc

THAT WAS JUST BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. OMG I WISH I COULD SING. IMMA GO KIDNAP LIKE A GOOD SINGER AND MAKE THRM SING THIS.
The chorus was amazing. Just fantastic. LOVE IT.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

HOLY F*****G S**T. Ohmygod. It's so beautiful. ♥ I want to sing it so damn bad! IF ONLY I WAS A GOOD SINGER. And ...knew the melody. Lolsz. It's beyond beautiful. It's stunning.♥ Now I'm in the mood to write a song. Or watch snow fall. HOLY S**T THAT REMINDS ME. It's AUGUST.

Erm, I love this. Of course. >8D The chorus especially because it's so sad and lovely.♥