A Summer Day

aloft the wild blue yonder

gazing upon the tumbling clouds,

somber.

yet so subtle.

 

laying amidst tall barks,

im only able to relish with a muted awe.

 

soon envy replaces my wonder,

how free and curing they will always will be.

Author's Note

Comments of any kind would be of great help.

Reviews

[Chris]

What is envied and whys?

What needs being cured? Is it the 'curing' of time passing or is it a hurt or issue with existence? What I am saying is I taste hints and not full flavors. Subtle and muted is fine but you still need something to be subtle about and silence is not always golden.

I really am not trying to be mean or hurtful... you've possibilites here that need growing.

Chris

[drops of jupiter.]

Absolutly lovely.

[...]

beautifully expressed
indeed
they will always be so