Hallows Eve

its halloween, i feel so spirited!

  On Hallows Eve the sky dims,

As night falls by the suns whim.

From Jack O lanterns Abused and marked,

does light push through the sheets of dark.

With full moon high behind misty clouds,

The streets are covered with shady shrouds.

And with that the end of Hallows Eve,

Till the next time when candy, kids heave.

Reviews

[Toni Blackerby]

i love it so much

[TimelordReaper]

this is awsome!!!!

[PokemonFan#1]

Awsome Poem B-mel! Keep it up!

[Imagination-mage]

this is really good!! as expected from b-mel

[Margarette]

This is a well-written poem about halloween. Jack-o-Lanterns are common among the neighborhood and the trick-or-treat of children are usually heard. This is perfect for a signboard in ever house during halloween. Keep writing!

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Really impressive poem! =)

Well done!