ALONE I SIT

Love comes and goes like time

Alone I sit, my mind it melts

Feelings I knew are lost I felt

Better times when love was met

We'd run the sand just to get wet

I’d take her hands palms entwine

Bread and cheese a splash of wine

Fires lit amour’s spitting flames

Meeting minds there were no games

Good times go fast, time won’t last

Drinking now from a broken flask

And if what was meant is not to be

Let go my heart let it be set free

Reviews

[Sophster300]

Wow! Really well written, nice write :)

[d]

this does the trick nicely.

[deeps]

Wow this is so well written and ever so poetic.
I like this write, it's so amazing!

[NemoNelson]

Wow. This really captures the thoughts of someone who has lost love. I can really relate to the feelings this poem portrays. I like it. Very good!