Black, Black Soul

This is how I feel after the unexpected happened...

Their cheeks brush,

Their hands touch,

Their hearts race,

And their mouths meet, in my disgrace.

I try to look away,

It's hard to follow,

When my eyes on you are stuck,

How can you be so shallow?

The arrow of cupid,

In my heart looks stupid,

As you stab a beautiful Sai,

Into my already broken heart.

Black Emotionless eyes,

Lost in my face,

Is the only gift from you,

Where is your grace?

It goes with the blackness,

Of a soul full of emptiness,

Like a fake laugh of a clown.

Which darkness will not drown.

Black Emotionless eyes,

You gave me,

Hatred in your eyes I saw.

Deepening my scar no longer,

Cause you are the one who will fall.

Black will my soul no longer be,

You will no longer get to me,

Cause you and her are not worth my time,

And without you I will do much more than fine.

You hurt me,

And that's okay,

I'm used to that,

My heart will not fret.

But my brother he doesn't deserve,

The only thing you can offer,

So go bury yourself in misery,

Black heart black soul, you're history.

Author's Note

This is my first actual writing here...Please leave me any idea you think could help me improve it. Thanks =)

Reviews

[Nora Grey]

This is really nice, though it sounds like the Lyrics to a song! The best though, I really enjoy the true emotions let loose in this poem.

[The Cute 1]

i love it