The Unnamed

This writing is really meaningful to me as it was my first write.

I miss you every second..

I question what my life is about,

My mind filled with doubt,

If you're living your life,

While I'm suffering in strife.

Or is it the other way around..

I want to kill myself,

For pain you don't deserve,

For the life you're giving up,

For the girl you want so much.

Skipping heart beats,

When a smile comes on your face.

When I'm lost in my disgrace,

Of a life not on its feet.

I need to find you,

Myself in you,

My mind is lost,

My heart covered in frost.

I'm constantly reminded

Of how we used to be guided,

With simple songs that mean so much,

Of your feelings, your soft touch.

My love for you is just so much,

When we're old you'll be my crutch,

Together we'll have amazing kids,

If always God forbids

Us to always be together,

Oh please help us have each other

In my arms, I want him to be,

Safe and sound, always with me.

I Love You

Author's Note

A poem, dedicated to him. I wrote it quite some time ago aswell.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a painful longing here, wanting to be united with the one you love... Beautifully bittersweet, your desires breathe out like a prayer...

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is beautifully written, great job