dreams only fester

dreams only fester

A Poem by V M Smith
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eh.

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ignorance may just be bliss
i'll never know
i notice every detail
every flake of snow
every drop of rain
every grain of sand
every time i lie
it reminds my heart i'm mad
this soul you trust
this touch, it's lust
but at least i told you so
before your dreams could grow

© 2013 V M Smith


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V M Smith
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Added on March 9, 2008
Last Updated on August 9, 2013
Tags: want, need, poem, love, relationship, hurt, unstable, imagine, details, mad, lust, dreams

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i'm not a writer; i am a liar. i sometimes write far too specifically; i sometimes write so vague even i lose track of what it is i'm on about. i tend to write when i can't think. this seems to be.. more..

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