give in again

kiss me?
please?
then just lay
with me
we'll watch tv
or maybe a movie
i'll be nice
i promise
i'll just lay here
with my arm
over your waist
and my chin
resting on
your shoulder
i'll kiss your neck
and smile
as you scold me
i'll run a finger
along the edge
of your new jeans
and i'll bite
your bare shoulder
and hold you close
until you either
push me away
or give in again

Author's Note

I fully appreciate reviews, especially when they tear apart my work in an attempt to make it better. Rip, tea, break it down. Tell me how you do not like it, how to make it better. I want your opinion. Truly.

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

I think I might have read this before, have you changed it? Not that it matters, it was playful then and its playful now, fun sort of romantic feeling about it. Sometimes I think simplicity is best, this scene is as clear and enjoyable to picture as about anything I have read all day.