Fish

about fish!!!!!!!!!!!!

See fish swim,

See fish eat,

See fish drown,

See fish eat,

Swimming the Ocean,

Big and small,

Screaming "It's Over!"

All day long.

Losing Loved ones everyday,

Imported onto seafood trays.

Some are salty,

some are sweet,

Some are spicy,

Some are meek.

See them eat

See them drown, and see them weep.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I really like this.
The way the thoughts are choppy & scattered kind of reminds me of the movie 'The tracey fragments'/
But anyways, I really like this.
It's quite neat.
-Elissa :)