Broken Friendship

I haven't been having the best time with a friend. We haven't tlked in months and wen we do tlk I'm doing the convo while she supports with one word answers like yahh kool oh and stuff like tht.

There's nothing I can say when I know what's happening. I can see the friendship crumbling down, I can smell the salty tears I can taste the sadness I can hear the ragged breathing as we cut ourselves into believing. I don't know what to say when I've been replaced, I don't know what to do with myself. We used to share everything, now you won't even tell me your true feelings. If you can't even tell me the truth, how am I supposed to know if you still love me?

Author's Note

It's not in my usual style because I'm on my phone. And when I sa cut ourselves into believing I don't mean literally cutting ourselves.

Reviews

[Strawberry Spices]

I love the way you described the way a friendship ends. My favorite part was "I can see the friendship crumbling down, I can smell the salty tears I can taste the sadness I can hear the ragged breathing as we cut ourselves into believing." Really nice.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beyond the realisation, nice message.......

[A Risen Heroine.]

A heartbreaking poem...
Nicely done.

~A Fallen Heroine~