Broken Friendship

Broken Friendship

A Poem by Allison
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I haven't been having the best time with a friend. We haven't tlked in months and wen we do tlk I'm doing the convo while she supports with one word answers like yahh kool oh and stuff like tht.

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There's nothing I can say when I know what's happening. I can see the friendship crumbling down, I can smell the salty tears I can taste the sadness I can hear the ragged breathing as we cut ourselves into believing. I don't know what to say when I've been replaced, I don't know what to do with myself. We used to share everything, now you won't even tell me your true feelings. If you can't even tell me the truth, how am I supposed to know if you still love me?

© 2010 Allison


Author's Note

Allison
It's not in my usual style because I'm on my phone. And when I sa cut ourselves into believing I don't mean literally cutting ourselves.

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I love the way you described the way a friendship ends. My favorite part was "I can see the friendship crumbling down, I can smell the salty tears I can taste the sadness I can hear the ragged breathing as we cut ourselves into believing." Really nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I love the way you described the way a friendship ends. My favorite part was "I can see the friendship crumbling down, I can smell the salty tears I can taste the sadness I can hear the ragged breathing as we cut ourselves into believing." Really nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beyond the realisation, nice message.......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A heartbreaking poem...
Nicely done.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Allison

Dinosaurland, HI



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