just a bite

just a little bite

to start the fun

its not like you were ever anyone

just one grasp

with nothing to grasp at

its not a side effect

.. just part of the fun

you wont remember falling

its just straight down

its a bit like dying

happens to everyone

and the leaves wont grow now that you're gone

the wind wont blow without your song

only time moves on..

and the leaves wont grow now that you're gone

the wind wont blow without your song

only time moves on..

in the shadow of trees

it follows me

if i fall i might try tp fly into the gap in the sky

touch softly

dont disturb your hair

its a miracle its still there

trails of you still linger

and i can hear you everywhere

and the leaves wont grow now you're gone

the wind wont blow without your song

only time moves on..

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I love the poem, flows so well and this stanza is so poetic and heartfelt!

'and the leaves wont grow now you're gone
the wind wont blow without your song
only time moves on..'

Would also make a great song as well:)

[Linda]

Seriously don't mean to sound like a b***h but your poetry lacks any idea, like a collage lacks a coherent message. Keep trying xxxxx