My Vagina Dorothy

My Vagina Dorothy.

 

 

This is what you came for; right?
I’m waiting.  You promised.

I’ll admit, so far, we are not impressed.

Its cold in here too, maybe that’s why

            we aren’t impressed.

You didn’t even have the consideration

            to turn up the heat.

            its only forced air.

Reviews

[Gee]

Lol,brightened my evening with this.Reckon I might use the,"it's cold in here line"Sweetly done

[Bramble Blossom]

thank you GEE

[Gee]

Oh,thank you,my pleasure.....

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Yikes, that is some attitude...
Cool

[Bramble Blossom]

thank you cherry.

[Benson Osuji]

great write and its very emotive

[Bramble Blossom]

thank you benson

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest tone and the direct emotion.
"I’ll admit, so far, we are not impressed."
I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the every good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bramble Blossom]

thank you coyote,

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

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wow...this is really telling it like it is...some people are so inconsiderate...

[Bramble Blossom]

thanks ft, some people really can be.