Take that smile.

Take that smile.

A Poem by Adam :P
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goodness

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This is a shatter of trust.

I never climbed that ladder and you never had enough.

This is a never know it untill it happens.

I never realized and you had the perfect disguise.

This is a smile that makes your heart sick.

I never answered and you walked on your own falt.

This is a puddle of tears with a question to be answered.

I never took your smile and you never fooled anyone.

© 2010 Adam :P


Author's Note

Adam :P
never ever

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You are talented! This is honestly so unique. I love your phrasing, though it's simple, there's a complexity to it. It's also very powerful. This is a great write, keep it up!

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was short but really, really good! I really liked it, and the message i believe it portrayed. Keep writing, this was amazing! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ok, You seriously HAVE to keep writing, Adam.
You've got a gift xD

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Adam :P
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