To be God.

This is just a poem how do you feel stronger then God? or stronger then anyone

Could you give me a better beat?

 

More of a meaning to a song.

 

So I can feel it.

I want to feel it.

 

Something more then death,life, and hurt.

 

I want to change it.

 

To be God for a day so i could take away this world's pain..

 

On prayers we give up.

 

We try harder or we don't try enough.

 

Does the world in Hell.?

 

Or is Hell the next stop.

Author's Note

little deeper then most of my stuff. just makes ya think i guess

Reviews

[Britny_ Grady]

Very... deep. Wondering if you could make the world better, if we are in hell or if it's what's at the end. Beautifully worded.