Unrequitable

Unrequitable

A Poem by White Rice
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This is my first real poem, so any good feedback would be greatly appreciated. Please go easy on me! It's about unrequited love.

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I look back
I see her
Many women could be her
But for some reason the only woman I want
Is the one I can't have 
I'm feeling messed up
I'm never enough
But this is still rough
I miss her so much
Without ever feeling her touch
But somehow I feel like she is beside me
I envision her body
With mine and I die
Inside I'm void of life
But I can't cry....

© 2015 White Rice


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Added on December 17, 2015
Last Updated on December 17, 2015
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