![]() UnrequitableA Poem by White Rice![]() This is my first real poem, so any good feedback would be greatly appreciated. Please go easy on me! It's about unrequited love.![]() I look back I see her Many women could be her But for some reason the only woman I want Is the one I can't have I'm feeling messed up I'm never enough But this is still rough I miss her so much Without ever feeling her touch But somehow I feel like she is beside me I envision her body With mine and I die Inside I'm void of life But I can't cry....
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