NEVERTHELESS

this poem is about knowing our mission in life and the difficulties that we encounter

distant, very distant i stand

from the enchanting fairy land

with sublime air and golden sand

banned, i feel so banned

to fulfill my solemn errand

with chained and shackled  hands

can , i'm not sure if i can

to relinquish what i've vowed  in the  deity clan

to spread and sweep piety and ruth i plan

like the missionary men

Reviews

[smurfett]

Very nice write poet....thank you for sharing

[Angel]

I can definitely relate to this piece!!
You have said it beautifully, Hun...
Surely, God has not called ME!!!!!

[Neon]

Very nice poem. Life's what where we live with struggle and fight at an every step to open the new door of hope. I loved your beautiful theme. Good job.

[Latifa]

thank you for stoping by

[Leslie Philibert]

the repeats, distant, banned give this a strong, appelative feeling, fine job

[Latifa]

thank you for taking time and reading it

[wordwarrior]

Very well written. You have great faith and will do wonders.

[Latifa]

thank you dear

[wordman]

a mission,it always`s comes with direction
just listen

[Latifa]

thank you wordman

[MsJewel]

Yes, my friend you can. Have faith in yourself!
:) Julie

[Latifa]

thank you darling

[Joyce S. Greene]

Whatever your goals, just believe in yourself and push forward. You can do it! Nice imagery and lots of emotion in your write.

[Latifa]

thank you darling

[Ruth]

Pushing boundaries is never easy and yet, you have, awesome xx

[Latifa]

thank you darlin for your review

[Pryde Foltz]

I get this. The road of an artist seems to be littered with so many road blocks, speed bumps, and detours. Keep on trucking, I guess. Great write.

[Latifa]

thank you dear