disguised chances

looking for a chance in the unfamilliar places

Rest my body upon the frost

The flaky souvenirs have departed

Hither, thither

Lingering thought

Awaiting the horizon's gate to inaugurate

Reviews

[Night]

Hmm...this deserves some thought....very well written!

[Ronnie]

Your words get me thinking, well done again.

[smurfett]

I agree...very interesting and thought provoking...thank you for sharing!!

[Latifa]

thank you for the read

[wordman]

short and sweet or should I say to the point

[Pryde Foltz]

Offering ones up to the sacred through belief or exhaustion. Intriguing piece.

[Latifa]

thank you for the read Pryde

[Scott Mou]

Interesting...very interesting.

[Dr. Wood ?]

very imaginative Latifa..So what else is new?

[Latifa]

thank you for the read dr.wood

[Dr. Wood ?]

no problem...Enjoyed it

[Sami Khalil]

I have great lingering thoughts after reading your wonder pen...Bravo

[Latifa]

thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice, like the alliteration in the third line

[Latifa]

thank you for the read my friend