pendulum of my life

pendulum of my life

A Poem by Latifa
"

tik tok the time is ticking seize your chances...........

"
Passed and deceased days
All have perished
Silently or with clamor
Testing the mighty heart to survive

Pulling through the new days
Reestablishing my existence
Entering a new phase and
Slowly adapting
Each rock on the way
Need to be removed
To fulfill my mission

Fantasy I will embark into
United or alone
Twirling into possibilities
Uplifting my hopes
Reintegrate peace within me 
Eternally flowing in my veins

© 2014 Latifa


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Well crafted piece, creative friend. I like the incorporation of past, present and future.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful acrostic...what shapes us leads us, in some ways...you have a new energy abound...I feel it :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, excellent crafting in this one!!!!! You've completed a picture of a yesterday, today, and tomorrow while maintaining form, not an easy thing to do. Cudos to you poetess!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you so very much Mark you have drawn a smile upon my face
I enjoy this very much, but you are missing a letter. Future ends in an "E"

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

THANKS FOR REMINDING ME I added it check it out
R. L. Hill

10 Years Ago

Love it. That ends the poem beautifully and seals all the thoughts together. Very good write!
Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you Quirklet
reinvent yourself each and everyday. that's the way :)
*********************************************************************************************************************************

Posted 10 Years Ago


Anand Sehgal

10 Years Ago

:) how are you?
Latifa

10 Years Ago

I'm pretty good thank you and you ?
Anand Sehgal

10 Years Ago

doing okay, having mild headache due to cold!
"Each rock on the way

Need to be removed

To fulfill my missio"

There are those obstacles that we all face in our ways. Some people take it step by step, some want to leave it all behind, some want to face it and face their fears. We have to be resolute and focus on the goal(s) or mission(s) in life...
A wonderful poem Latifa...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the review Sami
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:).........................

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

330 Views
16 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 31, 2014
Last Updated on January 31, 2014

Author

Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



About
"the cave you fear the enter, holds the treasure you seek" Joseph cambell this quote is my thriving recipe for dwelling in the enchanting castle of words, more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..