plastic eyes

plastic eyes

A Poem by Latifa
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read between the lines.

"
tasteless yet euphoric
colorless yet vivid
waters are as simple yet euphoric
open your insight
and don't wear plastic eyes
that miss the shadows
and judge the broken vessels
lean forward and break the plastic eyes
to embrace the third one
and plunge into silent hymn of peace

© 2014 Latifa


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Wow! That last line is a blast into the universe! What a write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


" open your insight
and don't wear plastic eyes"

Beautiful!

Feel free to check my work and review it. Thank you :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Posted 6 Years Ago


This work gave me a feeling of being born into an experience that is much greater
than myself. Great depth and wisdom.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

wow what an uplifting review, thank you very much
I like where this poem led me. What we see and process with our own eyes can be so tainted with misconceived perception, that to "embrace the third one'' not only becomes a personal tool to sort out inner turmoil, but a necessity, to find and locate ones inner peace. I would like to have full time access to my "third one".

Thank you, for sharing this wisdom with us.


Diego Paz

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review Diego..)...
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Philosophic and enchanting, this work carries its message on the wings of perfectly selected words. I liked it immensely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you DrD, your reviews always encourage me..)...
Great thought provoking poem... It had a kind of tension to it. Nicely written :)
-QuanaWana

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you darling.
This is one of those poems that make you think, and I love those types. ^-^ Wonderful work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you dear.
Peace unto the self opens the eyes - we truly see when we are at peace - without restriction or conditioning ... being at peace certainly gives a different perception of the world x

Posted 6 Years Ago


This one is very profound and deep and calls to see things through inner eyes of wisdom and consciousness.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for this great review.

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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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