PERFECTION IS........................

PERFECTION IS........................

A Poem by Latifa

Perfection,
Perfection lies within
The flaky skin layers of imperfections
Perfection,
It hide behind the mirrors of plastic smiles
 Behind the glaring eyes of self doubt

Perfection is  unpolished pearl
of imperfections
No magnifying glasses are needed
Shadows are casting 
to show you that
Perfection lies in your reflection

© 2014 Latifa


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"Perfection is unpolished pearl
of imperfections"

Wise use of word, short but it has strong and striking lines. Very well penned!

Posted 6 Years Ago


While man sees imperfection, Nature is made perfect.
This was a beautifully crafted and insightful piece of perfection.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review
Perfection isn't generally speaking found within most mortals. Not absolute perfection anyway.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Perfection also lies in his or hers perception. Beauty is as beauty does. Perfection would not exist without our imperfections. Quite the conundrum if you ask me. lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


Aptly said but I think perfection needs kindness it is a touchy subject.

Posted 6 Years Ago


The verse is point-blank explanation here...yet I'd have at this one and clear the imperfections a bit:

Perfection,
Perfection lies within
flaky skin layers of imperfections
Perfection,
It hides behind the mirrors of plastic smiles
Behind glaring eyes of self doubt

Perfection is unpolished pearl
of imperfections
No magnifying glasses needed
Shadows casting
to show you that
Perfection lies in your reflection



Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful, deep, and wise... Perfect imperfections, wonderful...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Perfection is unpolished pearl
of imperfections

There is the seed of perfection in all of us. Great write, Latifa.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review dear..:).............
flaws make us perfect in our imperfection...

they make us real...and nothing beats real.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review.
Dare I say this is 'perfection'?! Luverly sentiment in your poetic message Latifa...

it 'hides'

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you dear for the review.

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