I must break the habits. monologue

I must break the habits. monologue

A Poem by Latifa
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I just can't carry on likethis anymore......................I need a breack through

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am I oblivious ?
or they're just abstract 
am I chained to be oblivious ?
or they're just abstract
........sigh!
but I feel them
I feel them wrapping around my senses
around my right brain
........ sigh!........ again thinking....

are they strand or stones?
sometimes I feel chained
sometime I feel buried
my proactive sense are jammed
...........enough .
I can't blink without thinking
am I oblivious or they're just abstract
are they really here or it's just
a bland excuse to be normal
and reject singularity

© 2014 Latifa


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A frenetic read, the panic in your words is palpable. Sometimes you just have to wonder, and accept the abstract and oblivious where it stands. Excellent Latifa.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review dear
This is a vast poem, in the respect that it could signify many, many things, clever hon :) x

Posted 6 Years Ago


A powerful stream of thoughts and feelings... grasping for something more.. for understanding...

Posted 6 Years Ago


sometimes I feel chained
sometime I feel buried
my proactive sense are jammed
...........enough .
I can't blink without thinking.

.........sigh........ The poem which make me think!

Posted 6 Years Ago


a poem that for me impresses with ambuguity, and is so universal..

Posted 6 Years Ago


I know the feeling Latifa........keep plugging!

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is such a beautifully written piece so full of heart

Posted 6 Years Ago


Our mind throws open so many possibilities, sometimes so many at once that we are utterly confused as to decide anything. A very brilliant work. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review
my brain working over time now I`m confused was it really lol loved it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review
Brave and Beautiful words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review Avinash

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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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