Hibernating souls

Hibernating souls

A Poem by Latifa
"

it seems that each day new catastrophes are happening to our humanity and our attention to it is rarely raised

"



dragged down by our vices
the eyes became nothing less than frozen preservers
iced by the constant blood
a scanner that analyse and clean
automatons are in the making

souls? what souls
our souls have croaked
by the cancer of ignorance
often it's revived by benevolent acts
but soon it croaks again
oh poor stuporous souls
automatons are in the making

you may ask about the heart
well with a smirk on the face
I tell you 
that hibernation colonized it as well
it's only a synchronic pulses now
automatons are in the making

unparalleled, self is the center
we go solo now
oh but wait 
we have one more thing to do
burry our humanity 
stamp on its rubbles
 and open the chasm of doom

© 2014 Latifa


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Sad, sad world we seem to be in and it infuriates me that humanity doesn't want to know either, most look the other way...sigh, what can you do except voice what you feel needs voicing...potent write hon x

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for sharing your great thoughts with me and for the review
Seems there are so many atrocities in this world and we're bombarded with it in the media, people become immune to them unfortunately. If and when they're not happening in our own backyards, people don't seem to give it a second thought, comfortably numb, yes....par excellence here Latifa.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you Frieda
Excellent imagery, so vivid and pronounced it reached out and touched me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you Susan
Intriguing, strong, haunting imagery. Loved the way you have this set up, its more dramatic, like the piece. Excellent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you John
"our souls have croaked
by the cancer of ignorance
often it's revived by benevolent acts
but soon it croaks again
oh poor stuporous souls
automatons are in the making"

Humans should wake up from hibernation and speak up against so many ills and injustices. You speak with great authority here. Excellent...:)...........




Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you Sami for the review
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......................
Yes, somewhere automatons are in the making. But again, it doesn't imply, we become self operated and not help those in need of a prompt to rise above the basement. So long before we open the chasm of doom !
Wonderful use of words here, keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


who knows you might be right

Posted 6 Years Ago


There's an atrocity going on somewhere all the time. It's human nature

Posted 6 Years Ago


Latifa

6 Years Ago

yeah I know but the problem is that is getting more atrocious

2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

459 Views
20 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on July 22, 2014
Last Updated on July 22, 2014

Author

Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



About
"the cave you fear the enter, holds the treasure you seek" Joseph cambell this quote is my thriving recipe for dwelling in the enchanting castle of words, more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..