Am I losing it ?

Am I losing it ?

A Poem by Latifa
"

help u guys, what do u do when u have one of these?

"
words have declared the  rebel revolution
it had boycotted me
  and refused to come
in
a
proper
verse
am I losing it?

© 2015 Latifa


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Ironically, you found it.
Brilliant work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A wry, clever write, about a question that cannot be answered.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Because you are resting and preparing for holding the pace.
Great write dear..

Posted 8 Years Ago


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You sleep on it
Leave it alone

Go do other things
Come back to it again

It will flow all over the place

Posted 8 Years Ago


of course not,just on hold, like me

Posted 8 Years Ago


It happens my friend... and you can sit for days and not be able to write anything that you like but keep writing anything and it will come back :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


write junk and keep writing junk until the beauty raps on your door.

regards,
al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Entice them with more carrot less stick - tell 'em they can be part of a beautiful sonnet and watch 'em come running - oops thats a sonnet you owe them now...lol

"rebel revolution' - very nice phrasing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Latifa

8 Years Ago

thanks for the advice
ANTO

8 Years Ago

You're welcome but remember they charge interest on those promises ... xD
haha we've always known this at one time or another. don't worry. you're recharging.
many writers/poets have done this and apparently, it works.
nice way to deal with it, Latifa.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Latifa

8 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by
no way Latifa, you've still got it, how else could you write this :D Its always the way to go, when you have a negative situation make it positive, use the problem to write......like you have here :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Latifa

8 Years Ago

thank you Richard :)

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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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