that Ghost lover

that Ghost lover

A Poem by Latifa
"

memories as I see them, enjoy.

"


Memories,

Are a ghost lover we snuggle in our lonesome beds,

A ghost of whom we see,

A ghost of whom we welcome his surprising visits.

Whether wearing a salty suit or a flourish one,

We welcome his company.

With all his different suits,

We love his company.

His  different suits are

better  than those naked, bland hours of tik tok.

At least we’ll enjoy a cup of tea  in his company,

making  the air so wholesome,

we converse back and forth.

Within his  invisible dimension, we travel

Loosely,with no seat belts

roaming,

 floating,

no gravity hold us back in his company.

 So We snuggle that ghost lover because

His  snuggle are needed,

 His cuddles are sensual

They are our daily dose of  survival.


© 2015 Latifa


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the poem is so attracting, much enjoyed
syed

Posted 4 Years Ago


The ghost lover made all the more real by a whole plethora of 'suits'
- love the line - '...better than those bland hours of tik tok..." - such yearning !
A great piece Latifah.

Posted 4 Years Ago


clever stuff indeed, sorry that my review is so late but I only just today found my read requests, things have changed on here since I was a regular

Posted 4 Years Ago


Latifa

4 Years Ago

No problem Dr.wood your reviews are always welcomed, thank you for the read and the review :)
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This was a really cool metaphor, and fun to read. I liked the idea of the different suits especially.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Lovely just absolutely stunning
i love it

only my ghosts are horrific
lol
scary as hell
and when someone triggers them by behaving a person once did
i freak out
because i see everything again
it all comes and its just oh my


but here you make a ghost beautiful
i wish i had beautiful memories
like a nice ghost man lol

love it
and by the way

the painting
divine

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I love the personification and the form of it works nicely.

Posted 4 Years Ago


We make memories along the way, some become haunting and some liberating. We dream in them , we snuggle along them, then they become conversations between. An excellent write , )
Latina.....:).....

Posted 4 Years Ago


I suppose that knack is choosing your memories well. Gorgeous write, Latifa.

Posted 4 Years Ago


We all have that ghost lover... we seek to hold, just in our imaginations...

Posted 4 Years Ago


'His different suits are .. .. better than those naked, bland hours of tik tok.'

To feel that memories are ghosts is extraordinarily expressed here... because.. they haunt us, they go and come, they stay a while.. they cuddle and whisper, memories allow us to adapt our moods with smiles or regret. They are, as you say in your wonderfully created poem... ghost lovers.

And, we should all have them.. if not.. our past has been.. empty.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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