The Pit

The Pit

A Poem by brezybaby3

 Where can I go and hide,
until the pain subsides?
My world is torn apart,
Do even care?
Do you see the silent tears,
The screams of my heart?
I'm dying inside,
does anyone see?
Life goes on around me,
I try to chime in.
My heart pulls me back,
It wont let me leave,
And ties me to the pain.
And I sink into the darkness,
And hide within.

© 2015 brezybaby3

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A very descriptive statement about what the pit is like. There's always a light at the end of the tunnel. Always keep going. Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on December 29, 2015
Last Updated on December 29, 2015



napavine, WA

I started writing in 8th grade when the teacher put up a writing prompt for our journal and the story just flowed from my pen. I have had several poems published. I am currently going through my poe.. more..

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