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A Poem by Brianna.garcia
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A breakup poem

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You're red and I'm blue
You're the sun and in the moon
You said you loved me and I said I love you
And even tho we know it's true
I have to face the fact that I can never have you

When we first got together everything was fine
I was yours and you were mine
And I knew I loved you because we had that spark
But lately all we've seem is dark

I wish we could go back to the way we used to be
When I loved you and you loved me
I remember how we would talk for hours
But now we are like a crumbling tower

All I can say is I want the best for you
Even if that means I can't have you
At a time you were my world, my moon, and my sun
Now all I can say is that I'm done

At least you and I gave it a try
But sadly it's time to say bye
I'll never forget the way you once looked at me
And I hope that one day together we will be

© 2016 Brianna.garcia


Author's Note

Brianna.garcia
My lines are a tad bit off and my grammar isn't very good, but here's another amature poem. Hope you enjoy!

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extremely relatable, sometimes u dont get closure in break ups, that is the worst part of break ups!!! amazing job!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna.garcia

6 Years Ago

It's funny how a person can go from one minute consumed with at the anger and sadness from really ne.. read more
Justin

6 Years Ago

yea, my situation i was never able to get closure, i try not to think about it, just moving on with .. read more

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Added on December 6, 2016
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