Assurance

Assurance

A Poem by Shapeshifter

My love, please don't weep

From these table scraps you feed

Your light is conceled

© 2008 Shapeshifter


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Such mystery in these short lines, and yet there is more to your
story....AD

Posted 15 Years Ago
Should the first word of the second line be "From" because "For these table scraps you feed" doesn't really sound right. Maybe "From these table scraps you feed" or "For these table scraps you reach"?

Posted 15 Years Ago


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 Added on August 18, 2008
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Shapeshifter
Shapeshifter

Raleighwood, NC



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