You Are

You Are

There you are

And here I am

So far, far away

Helplessly in pain

Quietly in love

Silently awake

All night, all day

Hopelessly in pain

But then I see you

Across the milky way

A galaxy so far, far away

It is for that reason, I love you

You are sad, but I am too

You are mad, but I still love you

And when I am here

And you are there

Don’t forget, never forget

What I said, what I said

My passion, my love

Shall soar high, high above...

Reviews

[Amazonia_08]

This was brilliant.. I could feel the energy involved in it. Great work. :)

[The Black Warrior]

Quietly in love

Silently awake

All night, all day


Don’t forget, never forget

What I said, what I said

My passion, my love
Shall soar high, high above...

My favorite lines :D being quietly in love...I can relate to that LOL :))

this is beautifully written, thank you for sharing

[ANTO]

"here I am
So far, far away
Helplessly in pain" - Im really feeling this Brian - the desperation, the love affirmation
Im beginning to 'get you'.

[bee]

I would love to know your Inspiration for such beautiful words.... but a magician never reveals his secret :)

[Brian M. Peeples]

I love how you said that last part, because I replied to a review the other day, with the exact same words. What I will say, though, is that my inspiration comes from inspiration itself, and the inspiration that makes inspiration inspiring is its inspiration. Hope that clears everything up! ;) Although, you'd have to be mad to understand my rambling, well.. sometimes.

[bee]

Hahaha...yes I understood everything :P

[Falling Leaf.]

This is almost lyric in nature. I loved it, and the profound emotion I could feel: adoration and longing. Normally I find it difficult to read and enjoy rhyming poetry, but I delighted in your poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Afraa]

Almost sounds like a song. Loved it.

Keep it up!

[Skai Rain]

Another strong poem. Love sucks, but hopefully everything will fall where it is supposed to.

[Cool Girl]

I really enjoyed this! :)

[Matching Socks]

This is beautiful Brian. Can feel the longing in your words for a far away love.

[Lizardo]

Perfectly describes the love for someone. I lovely piece of work and the lines that grabbed my attention:
''You are sad, but I am too
You are mad, but I still love you
And when I am here
And you are there''

[Brian M. Peeples]

Thanks! I appreciate the comment. I think my favorite lines would have to be, if someone else wrote it:

"But then I see you
Across the milky way
A galaxy so far, far away
It is for that reason, I love you"

[Lizardo]

That one i good also!

[Brian M. Peeples]

Hah! I'm not sure why, but I've been writing more poems in the past few weeks than I have within the entire year.

[Brian M. Peeples]

I think it's because winter is my favorite season to write. I've written eight poems in December compared to the fifteen I've written from January to November. (I only write poetry when it comes from the heart. That's why I don't write as much of it. Quality over quantity!)

[Lizardo]

Thats true! yeah i only write when I'm inspire and the season yeah you are right because all of christmas and being with family, that's why i love winter

[Brian M. Peeples]

I think when I'm able, I may move to a place that's winter year-round haha! Well, at least, the climate. Not a big fan of the heat, and the wintry scenery sparks my inspiration. Many of my stories begin in winter.

[julia senpai]

i love this