Sometimes

Sometimes, 

I wonder

if the earth 

shall live on

once I die...

but then 

I see you,

and...

I realize,

that she

will be 

perfectly 

fine...

and so 

will I...

Author's Note

One of my shorter poems. Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Moonlight]

Short and elegantly written. Nice job!

[Ally]

I really enjoyed this! Nice job!

[Cambion]

Shorter can be elegant, as it is here. I like poetry that isn't afraid of death. Thanks for the read!

[ANTO]

It has a resounding faith and spirituality Brian - calming to read
thanks for the RR

[Preliving]

Touching, sweet, beautiful.

[The Black Warrior]

Aww, this is so cute...my goodness this is beautiful! :D

short and simple but beautiful....LOVED IT

[Lizardo]

This is sad and it gets to the heart, when we really love someone they are our light in the darkness
One great short poem, I like it.

[Cool Girl]

Are you in love or something? Sorry, you don't have to answer that:)
I like it! It is short and sweet and appealing! Nice job:)

[Brian M. Peeples]

Everyone is in love with someone or something, whether you know it or not, even if you won't admit it. Love is a universal way of expressing how we feel towards other people, animals, inanimate objects. How many times have you said, "I love this song," or "I love coffee!" We represent love with a feeling of joy and acceptance. So, in a metaphorical sense, yes, I am in love. You can even allow "love" to co-exist with "who, what, where, when, and how" because you can answer each question while referring to "love." But there are many different kinds of "love." I love life, I love nature I love my job, I love to write, and I love a girl. Does that answer your question, thoroughly? :)

[Cool Girl]

Yes! Thanks:)

[Brian M. Peeples]

Welcome, haha.