did you know your smile....

did you know your smile…13.3.2013 

he said

to me,

“did you know

your smile is as wide as Texas?”

i laughed

at him.

i didn’t know

my smile could be that big.

he said

“we can

just laugh at each other,

….type to me please.”

he said

“stop playing

with your hair

it’s so sexy, and your smile...”

he said

“i am learning

to go slow,”

i said “i love slow hands”

he said

“i might

forget my vows”

i asked which ones he meant?

he said

“ i love it

when you sit close” 

i said “can you see down my dress?” 

                                              you are bad

                                              i am bad

                                              we are bad

                                              English verb homework  A+

i said

“i might be

a handful of pleasure”,

he said “wow, bring it on!”

he said

“if you don’t

turn up for our date

i will just die”

he said

“we know

each others hearts now,

my pretty lovely creature.”

i said,

“so, my lovely,

be good,

……be very good.”

and he 

left me that night,

with a smile

as wide as Texas.

Author's Note

this was a visible Skype call just before meeting for a first date.

Reviews

[Michael G.]

A fun write! Liked the A+ ! I can see this happening in today's world. It probably wouldn't have worked back in the day, at a bar as an attempt to meet and pick up a lady. LOL! (Hope the meet was just as fun.)

[brigid]

thanks michael, nice to hear from you.i have been distracted with painting so not on here too much :(
the meeting was fun but the relationship didn't go too far...

[Just Kim]

This is amazing!

[brigid]

thank you tabbycat..perhaps you can relate to it?

[brigid]

this was a skype date at the beginning of a new relationship...

[Mariam]

it's wonderful! I smile while reading

[brigid]

so glad it brought a smile to your lips..thanks for your review mariam...

[Mariam]

My pleasure:)

[thewritingthespian]

I love the dialogue in this poem! Good job! By the way i love your profile picture! (lady of shalot)

[brigid]

appreciate your comments thewritingthespian.thanks. i live by a lake so lady of the lake is quite appropriate...love the pre-raphaelites....waterhouse..

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Luv it :D Thank you for sharing

[brigid]

Thanks so much DaniElle for your lovely comments...it's the beginning of a new relationship.....fingers crossed...