missing you.

already i feel incomplete
without her here.
missing her to no ends,
depression
mingling with the smoke
in my lungs.
constantly reminding myself
that only a few days
will see her return,
but still unable to cheer up,
to smile,
without her here.
i need her..

Author's Note

critique is welco9me. :)

Reviews

[Tori]

This is a very sweet poem. I like the way you got the point across in such a little space, this is the epitome of the phrase "short and sweet". Good word choice. I like this a lot. :)