SELF CONTROL

just what the title says

So tightly held inside

Each day that passes

Learning to forget

Force it down, forget about it.

 

Can't say what this does to me

Open your eyes and see

Nothing I do is right

Tonight and every night

Rejection is the biggest threat.

Old fears haunt me.

Let go to hold on.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Let go to hold on.

or hold on to let go...
Pondering the imponderable...

[Janice Ann]

"Let go to hold on" absolutely phenomenal. This is an in depth way to look at it...Great write!

Janice Ann

[Haden]

"Nothing I do is right
Tonight and every night
Rejection is the biggest threat"

I love this, so cool that you were able to manipulate the "self control" part along the side without it being obvious. You nailed your feelings down, you compromised nothing to keep the form. Great write and, as usual, i know where you're coming from. xoxo Chris

[Yvonne Heidt]

Excellent. I JUST noticed the "self control" letters going down. LOL (It's okay, I'm always late to the party.) Anyway, that's what makes this so good, that you wrote a flowing piece thats coherent with the letters. AND you put honest feelings and emotions it. Great job.

[Adam]

I like this one a lot. I need to learn self control sometimes too.