You

its all about her, i just cant help it!

Smile spread accross my lips

can't get you out of my head

giddy, butterflies when you're around

not sure where it's going

this is a feeling I wont pass up

you are wonderful, amazing

but, oh so hard to read

I just long to see you smile again

to get the chance to be the one to make you smile

Just love talking to you

discovering new things

You are a puzzle I would love to get the chance to put together.

Reviews

[Janice Ann]

Sweet. I love the pureness of your happiness to be around the person you so love. It is a wonderfully lovely poem and I know that giddiness and I know that smile that never leaves your face...it's a feeling that we all wish would last longer than it does...I hope that for you!

Rock on darlin'
Janice Ann

[Mark D. Chevalier]

Can't believe I missed this one. How tender and loving, and I liked the comparison of the relationship to a puzzle. In the quiet moments of life, when the world steps aside and we're alone with our thoughts, this is what life should be about.

Beautifully done!
Mark

[Forist.johnston]

How perfectly written. I could feel the power in every word, the longing after each verse. Great write.

[Sean_Douglas]

Reminds me of Sappho's "He is a hero..."

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i love the simple language and conversational flow of the language throughout the poem. but the last line blew me away. it was perfect.

[Staci Brown]

awww, this is such a sweet poem hon :) sweet and innocent :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[The Beatnik]

nice write. why can't someone write something like this for *me*? :( oh woe is me indeed.

[Angel's Lady]

You are a puzzle
I would love to get the chance to put together. -- Very nicely written!

Smile spread accross my lips -- Yes. It just feels good sometimes, doesn't it, to think about someone.

Great write! Good job on spreading that smile around!