sweet cold weather

its cold,

I want you here,

so you can hold me,

tight and dear,

the sweet cold weather,

it makes my cheeks flush red,

turns the tip of my nose pink,

and smile from the silly things you've said,

the sweet cold weather brings me to you,

and even if im in freezing you wrap your arms around me,

then you walk me to your place,

and then make me sweet raspberry tea,

if this weather never fades,

id be with you for a long time,

cause then if have your heart,

while I the sweet cold weather you have mine.

Reviews

[ksscampos]

When we miss someone we love, the warmth of their touch. Beautifully written

[yuki]

Thank you glad you like it

[Laura Lynn]

perfect, who doesn't like raspberry tea, that is one of nature's perfect most perfect fruits of the briars

[willweb]

Beautiful and so filled with happiness and love. I really enjoyed this one today.

[yuki]

Thank you and im sorry i havent read your writting ive gotten busy and schools been crazy

[John Mcnab]

Sweet poem! I love the innocence and in this piece, it is cute. Keep up the good writing!

[yuki]

Thank i will :)

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I love the innocence in this piece. very well penned, sweet and all. The word choice is amazing and the style is uniquely used. I like the way your voice shines through here and how personal this piece seems even though you've shared it with us. Awesome write

[yuki]

Thank you glad you liked it

[Ryan Henderson]

I like it, I like how you inserted the emotion of loathfullness into it with your choice of words. I liked the language, and the flow, I find that I always like the way your poems flow, it is something you are good at ;)

[yuki]

Haha thank you i just keep a rhythm :)

[Ryan Henderson]

You do a very good job, keep it up!

[yuki]

Thanks will do :)

[jennifer little]

great write i liked this poem as well keep up the good work

[yuki]

Will do :)