Just let me go

I found out that I could

actually have a better life

than the life I thought

I wanted, I will not die

 

I’m gonna put my life on hold

this words, I hold on to all my life,

die another day within a world so cold

I’m losing my faith

 

Just let me go

just open your heart

and let in roll,

don’t let go

of my hand

it won’t take long

 

The lights go out

do you not really remember the sky?

It was such a clear night

out, a shiver ran down my spine

 

Just let me go

just open your heart

and let it roll,

don’t let go

of my hand

it won’t take long

 

Just let me go

Just open your heart

and let it roll,

what are things coming to?

Don’t let go

of my hand

it won’t take long.

Author's Note

I'm Italian, sorry for my English :) Thanks!

Reviews

[Philip Muls]

The poem speaks of desperation and fear of death, yet also hope. Hope you can hold on to life in some way. Other life than you expected...better. Captivating words, well done.

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[A. Amos]

Felt your heart in your writing...bravo!

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Bruna,

A poem that reads like a song.That feeling of letting go, and still not wanting to be let go.
Brava!
:)