Eight Little Words

Eight Little Words

A Story by Brytt
"

A story in 8 words.

"

Inhale.

Pent up emotions wanting to escape.

Scream.

© 2011 Brytt


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Brytt
For a contest. Be brutal.

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You know, I didn't know writing a whole story in eight words was possible, but you have a clear beginning, middle, and end. You have an idea that is resolved at the end. Very well done!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so utterly real. Maybe because I often find myself feeling these eight words you put into a beautifully deep short story. The raw emotion pours from it. Amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 19, 2011
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Brytt
Brytt

Britt, IA



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