This is a test

This is a test

A Poem by Thomas B. Buckman
"

Fun with fibonacci!

"

 
This
is
This is 
a test, see..
so understated.
this beauty we seek completes us
complicates us to the core of our mortal being
this beauty we find, is not enough
This is a test of your power
go get important
it's your due
your clue
is
not
what you
what you seek
it comes so easy
just come and see, you will know where
i will be, for this is the one time that we will see
twenty-one and counting, life's pressures are mounting, what you find will make you grow, it's time.
into this garden, we fall into the beauty of
our life, passion for what we are
be yourself, its easy
know what you
want for
you.

you
you
you are
your are the
beauty that binds us
it finds us in our end of days
appreciation
know what you truly are
be yourself
during
this 
test.









 


 

© 2009 Thomas B. Buckman


Author's Note

Thomas B. Buckman
Um... im trying something new here.

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interesting...
this is one of those poems that you have to sing out or rap for you to really hear the flow...
so its definitely fun to read. lol

i understand what your overall point was here, but you didn't say it strong enough.
you lacked that WOW factor.

overall, i did enjoy reading this. it has great potential.
good job.



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Thomas B. Buckman
Thomas B. Buckman

Osage Beach, MO



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My name is Thomas Buckman. I was a twenty year old unemployed poet... Now I'm a 21 year old member of the United States Army. "My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and .. more..

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A Poem by Thomas B. Buckman