Inscription on The Gates of Hell

Abandon hope, all ye who enter here,

My words are clear and sincere.

Death will be thy immortal friend; gluttony will be my consort,

Pain will be thy unceasing bedfellow; Pleasure will be my escort.

Dismantle eternal love; undo thy “righteousness”

If ye desireth eternal darkness.

Leaveth now and observeth not

For you will be my suffering servant.

 

Reviews

[Melanie Genevieve]

Woah you can just imagine the fear rippling through anyone who reads this at the gates. Doesn't sound like disney world to me. I'll stick to my theory of once you're dead you're dead. Great job here!

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Very dark and descriptive, felt like I could feel the heat that was past the gate. Nice job!